Thursday, July 31, 2008

Poem-haiku

Hello, (AGAIN!)
This time for haiku.
Haiku is a 5-7-5 syllabus poem. Like "achive" has 2 syllabus.
Read 3 of my Haiku!
Sit back, don't relax and read!

Diaster in Si-chuan,
Many lost their family,
but still perservere.

Why must there be war?
Can't the countries live in peace?
Sign some peace treaties.

She ate the apple,
she fell into a deep sleep,
never awoken.

1 comment:

jhang-jhang said...

hi jerrold!!!! you've really improved a lot... but i suggest that you have to check some of the wrongly spelled words......anyway, i had fun reading your poems....see yah