Hello, (AGAIN!)
This time for haiku.
Haiku is a 5-7-5 syllabus poem. Like "achive" has 2 syllabus.
Read 3 of my Haiku!
Sit back, don't relax and read!
Diaster in Si-chuan,
Many lost their family,
but still perservere.
Why must there be war?
Can't the countries live in peace?
Sign some peace treaties.
She ate the apple,
she fell into a deep sleep,
never awoken.
Thursday, July 31, 2008
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1 comment:
hi jerrold!!!! you've really improved a lot... but i suggest that you have to check some of the wrongly spelled words......anyway, i had fun reading your poems....see yah
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