Thursday, July 31, 2008

Poem-narritive

Hello!
Hi!
Now for narritive poems. Basically they are poems that tell stories, like a passage.
They do not need to rhyme. I wrote one very intresting poem about every precious grain of rice.

Farmers burnt their feet,
just for the rice we eat.
From seed to rice,
there is no destiny dice.
From farms to the market,
a long journey ahead,
towards the destiny that will behold.
So do not say, " mum, brother's lice
got into my precious rice.
The food prices are rising fast,
destiny revealed.
Why haven't once I tended a tree
or watered the plants?
If we do not act now,
there won't be any destiny.
Preserve the planet,
Preserve the destiny!
Do not take rice for granted,
or it will be unwanted!

2 comments:

madelyn said...

WOW!
i'm impressed!
0.0
are you gonna write all poems for your posts?
that will be like SOOO difficult!

tomorrow said...

lol..

pls dun write poems on all ur post!!!!! COS IT'LL BE DAMN BORED.. T_T

winnie can't stand boredom.. lol..